The Wooly Adventures Of Clyde The Sheep- Chapter 2

As Clyde approached the mysterious creature he saw
its terrifying face and rough texture. His mother had
told him stories about these monsters and therefore
he recognized it as a creeper. His Mother told him that
they were just myth and legend, but one was here....
Ill just run away he thought to himself.
He ran into the forest sweaty & scared.
. . .
It was a week after he ran into the forest and he
was coping well with the situation he was in...


[font=synchrolet]to be continued!!![/font]

Nice!! Cant wait till 3!!!

Can you start making the chapters a little longer

[quote author=StativeSpencer link=topic=4034.msg20993#msg20993 date=1437743411]
Can you start making the chapters a little longer
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I agree. Try to make them a few paragraphs longer. It will help with the story!!

[quote author=dtown2002LuvLuna link=topic=4034.msg20995#msg20995 date=1437743568]
[quote author=StativeSpencer link=topic=4034.msg20993#msg20993 date=1437743411]
Can you start making the chapters a little longer
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I agree. Try to make them a few paragraphs longer. It will help with the story!!
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And the preview for this chapter covered more than half of it if there longer it wont be a problem

[quote author=StativeSpencer link=topic=4034.msg20998#msg20998 date=1437743697]
[quote author=dtown2002LuvLuna link=topic=4034.msg20995#msg20995 date=1437743568]
[quote author=StativeSpencer link=topic=4034.msg20993#msg20993 date=1437743411]
Can you start making the chapters a little longer
[/quote]
I agree. Try to make them a few paragraphs longer. It will help with the story!!
[/quote]
And the preview for this chapter covered more than half of it if there longer it wont be a problem
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I agree again. Try to fix these problems in the next chapter!! It will make the story much better!!

Thanks for The Feedback!
Ill try to make them longer!

Np Hope it makes the story better!! ;D