Reality to Minecraft: Chapter 1

Hi! So Ive decided to start a story. I hope this goes well. Here we go!

Chapter 1

I sighed. One more boring school day until Saturday. On Saturday, I could play Minecraft. I was excited. I squealed with joy. Then, the popular girls on the bus with me just stared, pointed, and laughed. I was extremely unpopular. No friends. Im not a geek or a nerd, Im just well you know, me. Yeah its sad I guess but its true. But when I play
Minecraft, I have friends. Ok, Im not a liar so I cant say that. Im quite lonely on Minecraft. I usually have a hard time making friends. Well, its hard for anyone I suppose. Some are mean, some are just jerks. The bus came to a stop. I sighed again.
"Ambridge High," I muttered. I walked in the building.


I walked to my locker. When I unlocked it, a boy with a scary mask on jumped out. Just like any person, I screamed. The whole hall looked at me. I burst in tears and ran into the bathroom with the whole hallway laughing at me. "Why?" I said between sobs. "Why do they hate me? Am I just ugly? No. Maybe theyre jealous." I giggled at that thought. Why would somebody be jealous? Especially of me. I sucked up my tears and walked to class. But on the way, I bumped into a boy. "Sorry," I said frowning. "Its ok," he said sweetly, "Why are you sad?" A tear ran down my cheek. "I-I was they girl they p-pranked." I said stuttering. "Oh," he said a bit sad. Then he wrote something on a piece of paper and handed it to me.


"Call me," he said smiling. I smiled back. Then, we went our seprate ways. I didnt know what to do. Did he want to be friends? Date eachother? I got confused and thought about other things. After that, I carried on my day which seemed like forever. The last bell rang. I raced out of thr school to the bus. I sat on the bus day dreaming until it was my stop. I ran into my house and to my room. I got my iPhone 5 out from my bag and dialed the number. "Hello?" I said. "Hi!" A voice said from the other line. "Is this the girl I gave my number to?" "Yep!" I replied. "By the way," he asked, "Whats your name?" "Melody," I said nervously. "Im Jason. Wanna come over sometime?" he asked. "Sure!" I said happily. "Text me your address." "Ok." he said. "Gotta go. Bye!" "Bye!" I said. Then he hung up



I put down the phone and sighed dreamily. A person actually talked to me. I was so happy. I jumped for joy. "Mello! Why are you happy?" My sister snarled. Oh yeah, I forgot to mention I have a twin sister, Azure. "Shut up," I said. "Fine," she said being all sassy and stuff. Azure is tall with beautiful brown hair and eyes. Im short with messy brown hair kept under a kind of cute beanie. I decide to play some Minecraft. I see the computer glowing. "Glowing?" I thought out loud. Then, I was sucked in.

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I just love the suspense! Keep going!

Lol your a girl in the story? And I cant wait until Chapter 2!!!! ;D

I like stories like these! Where you have a character with a normal teenage life, and suddenly, they discover they have superpowers, or have something supernatural happen to them, like the computer sucking her in.

In other words,
I love this story so far! 11/10

I came here to laugh not to feel...

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Lol your a girl in the story? And I cant wait until Chapter 2!!!! ;D
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Whoops I thought daretrogamer made this!!! LOL

Oo I like how this story is going so far, cannot wait for future chapters and to see the story improve as it progresses!

Also I liked the cliffhanger a lot as it could lead into many different situations. :)

Seems like a great start. I support you to keep going!








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